Two examples of promotions that were oh so close to hitting the mark crossed my path recently. One was a one-page insert in my local newspaper for a grand opening of a store in our area. It was really more of a grand re-opening as they had closed for a while to make some improvements to the building and add new products, but that’s not the point. The ad declared that they were offering $1 espressos, door prizes, popcorn, and other such niceties to celebrate the occasion. The one thing they neglected to include in the ad was any store information. There was no address, no phone number, and no store hours!
Now, this store is targeting people who live in our area and they are no doubt assuming that everyone already knows where the store is. I say, however, that you should never assume potential customers know anything about your business. I want that $1 espresso, and I’d be happy to visit the place and check out their new stuff, but because I don’t regularly shop there I don’t know if they open at 8 am, 9 am or 9:30 am, and there’s no phone number for me to call and find out. I’m not going to drive over there if there’s a chance it might be closed, so guess what? I’m not going. My ever-practical husband says that I can simply look up the market in the phone book. But that’s an extra step that your customers shouldn’t have to take when your ad is in their hands.
The other example came in the form of an email promotion offering me a free sample of a dog chew:
Where do I click to get the free sample? Clicking on the link to Greenies.com does take you to the form to get the sample, but this email is missing a key ingredient-the “call to action.” It should say something like, “Click here for your free Greenies Lite sample,” or “Request your free sample here.” It won’t be clear to everyone receiving this email that to get the sample you have to click where it says, “You are receiving this email because you opted in for future communications at Greenies.com.” The purpose of this email is to get people on the site so they can see the products and try one for free, right? So, make it easy and not a guessing game by providing a clear link to whatever action you want to be taken.
It doesn’t take an advanced marketing degree to compose an effective ad or promotion. Just make sure to include the basics and you’ll be off to a great start!
Posted on November 17th, 2007 by Vanessa
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